Overall mixing of the track sounds good. I think youre percussion could use a bit more variation to keep listeners interested. Breakdown sounds good, nice build up. The piano sounds too electronic. You could fix this by adding some different volume levels to the notes and let some notes end faster then others. Track has some good potential. Keep up good work
It isn't piano :)
Nice tune. Only thing the rythem starts nice, but when main tune comes in the drums get pushed back. Maybe check some volume levels on this one. I think with some work on it the track has good potential.
Hard to give good feedback on somthing like this.
I listen to some weird music but haven't heard anything like this. I can't give good comments on this. Only thing i can say is about the mix. And the mix is flat, there is a lot of mid but almost no low or high. Maybe work a bit on that.
Spaced out indeed.
WOW overkill at the reverb here :D but it fits the track. Nice guitar play, maybe it would be nice to use a bit less reverb on the high pitched lead sound guitar, but keep the reverb on the guitar chords.
You may need to check the recording at 0:48 also at 1:33 song distorts a bit.
finally someone who also likes this kind of music :D. It's a difficult genre to get some good feedback on. Title totally fits the track itself. I love what you do with the noise in the background. Keep up the good work.
Liked this track
The track itself sounds good. One thing i noticed is the mix is a bit flat. When i think of triphop i would like a bit more low in the rythem. The transition at 2.23 is very nicely done. Totally transforms the track in something more evolved. Overall nice track.
Well, triphop is ofcourse only a subgenre. I don't see how the mix is flat though, but thanks for the review. (:
Bassline realy kicks ass. Don't think ambient fits this tracks overall sounding. Other thing i noticed is that the song has 3 or 4 parts that are put together. The transition between these parts are a bit harsh. Mixing sounds good. Maybe a bit too much bass in my speakers. Overall track sounds okay.
what catagory do you reckon it should be?
my ears hurt.
this track is even worst then the other
oh my god
lol. You think my music is bad.
Yeah because your music sucks insect infekted lumber
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